I understand that this book has been recently edited to change it's writing style. I still found it awkward at certain points but the flow was ok. As for the actual story, I loved it. I liked Isa and even though she's submissive at nature, she still tried to find her backbone and speak her mind. I felt the ending was rushed and from reading the description of the second book, it starts after the Epilogue which was a bit of a time jump. Don't know if it's a good thing or a bad thing. Overall it was a good read.